Funnel Alignment

Stage 1 — Venus Fly Trap (VFT)

Clean. 3 scripts follow SOP 14 perfectly. No CTA, pure value. No changes needed.

Stage 2 — Direct Response (DR)

SOP 31 compliant. 17 DR scripts covering 10+ unique buying reasons. Agency-attack framing has been replaced with “spending before you’re ready” positioning across DR-02, DR-04, and DR-12. Hawk OS (DR-18) is the strongest new angle. Creative diversity is now SOP 31 compliant.

Stage 3 — Apply

Strong. Landing page and confirmation page are strong. No SOP conflicts.

Stage 4 — Hammer Them

RT scripts are all clean. Need pillar tagging for sequencing. See recommended 72-hour sequence below.

Stage 5 — Attend

Email nurture sequence handles this. See emails page for review.

72-Hour Retargeting Sequence

Recommended sequencing for Stage 4 (Hammer Them). Each script mapped to a pillar with intentional emotional pacing.

Hour Script Pillar Purpose
0–6RT-06 (Keynote)ExpectationsOpen with authority
6–12RT-08 (Awards)ExpectationsStack credibility
12–18RT-01 (Industry?)ObjectionsAddress #1 concern
18–24RT-05 (Shiels)2nd LayerData proof
24–30RT-02 (Not Tech?)ObjectionsLower barrier
36–42RT-09 (Brand Clients)2nd LayerEnterprise proof
42–48RT-04 (Results Timeline)ExpectationsSet honest expectations
48–54RT-11 (Mum’s Home)ExpectationsEmotional peak
54–60RT-12 (120 People)2nd LayerTeam legitimacy
60–66RT-03 (Behind Scenes)ExpectationsFOMO
66–72RT-13 (Closer)ObjectionsDecision trigger

Paid Ad Strategy Summary

Budget Allocation
TierMonthlyUse Case
Starter$3,000–$5,000Testing creative, building pools, 1 workshop/quarter
Growth$5,000–$10,000Consistent pipeline, 1 workshop/month
Scale$10,000–$25,000Multiple workshops/month, AU + international
Stage Split
Stage% of BudgetPurpose
Stage 1 (Warm)25%Build 75%+ viewer pools
Stage 2 (Hot)40%Drive LP visits + applications
Stage 3 (Apply)15%Landing page + form
Stage 4 (Convert)10%72-hour retargeting blitz
Flywheel10%Hawk Academy free course retarget
Key Benchmarks (AUD, Meta)
MetricTargetRed Flag
CPM (Stage 1, cold)$12–$20>$40
Cost per ThruPlay$0.05–$0.12>$0.30
CPC to landing page$1.50–$3.00>$7.00
Cost per application$50–$100>$300
Cost per attendee$150–$300>$600
Unit Economics

Revenue per seat: $3,500. At 30 seats, $300 blended CPA = ~$12,000 total spend. Revenue: $105,000. ROAS: 8.75x.

Platform Split
TierMetaYouTubeLinkedInTikTok
Starter85%10%0%5%
Growth75%15%5%5%
Scale65%15%12%8%
Creative Refresh Cadence

Need 15–20 new creatives/month. Harry batch-films 2 sessions/month (2–3 hrs each) = 8–12 raw takes. Mixed hooks/bodies/CTAs yield 15–20 final creatives per shoot.

Fatigue signals (replace when 2+ hit simultaneously):

  • CTR decline >20% from peak over 5–7 days
  • CPM increase >30% from launch
  • Frequency >2.5 cold, >6 warm
  • CPC increase >40% from 3-day avg
Scaling Triggers (all must be true for 7+ days)
  • ROAS >4x
  • Cost per application <$120
  • Cost per attendee <$350
  • No active creatives showing fatigue
  • Workshop fill rate >80%

Scale vertically: +15–20% daily budget every 5–7 days. Monitor 48hrs.

Dog Food Exercise — The 16 Buying Reasons

Per SOP 31: list every unique reason someone would buy, then ensure each has at least one dedicated creative.

# Buying Reason Covered By Status
1Stop burning on paid adsDR-01, DR-11Covered
2Understand what good looks like before spendingDR-02, DR-04, DR-12Covered
3AI Search FOMO / future-proofingVFT-01, DR-05Covered
4Hands-on implementationDR-03Covered
5AI workflow / tools accessibleDR-04, DR-06Covered
6Real results / case studiesDR-07, DR-08, RT-05Covered
7ROI math / paybackDR-10Covered
8Mission / free educationDR-14, DR-15Covered
9Ongoing support / accountabilityDR-13Covered
10Workshop experience / atmosphereDR-09, RT-03Covered
11Career change / new skillGAP
12Hire smarter / evaluate agenciesGAP
13Networking / 30 business ownersGAP
14Speed / compress 6 monthsDR-16 (NEW)NEW SCRIPT
15Second revenue channel / diversifyPartially DR-01NEEDS DR-17
16Agency-built AI workflows (Hawk OS)DR-18Covered

Gap Script Concepts

New scripts to fill gaps #11, #12, #13, and #15 from the Dog Food exercise.

Gap #11 DR Questions
The Highest-Paid Skill Nobody’s Talking About

Hook: “If you can write an email, you can learn SEO. And it pays better than most careers.”

Buying Reason: Career change / new skill

Gap #12 DR Questions
How to Tell If Your SEO Agency Is Actually Working

Hook: “I run an agency with 120 people. Here’s what a good one should show you every month.”

Buying Reason: Hire smarter / evaluate agencies

Note: Pro-agency positioning — validates the agency model while empowering the buyer.

Gap #13 DR Expectations
30 Business Owners in One Room for Two Days

Hook: “The connections you make at the workshop might be worth more than the SEO.”

Buying Reason: Networking / 30 business owners

Gap #15 — DR-17 DR Questions
What Happens When Google Ads Gets Too Expensive to Run

Hook: “If 100% of your leads come from paid ads, you don’t have a business. You have a subscription.”

Buying Reason: Second revenue channel / diversify

Note: Different from DR-01 — this is the RISK angle, not the COST angle.

Key Principles (v5)

The rules established in this review session. Every script, ad, and landing page must align with these.

1. Enemy

“Spending before you’re ready” — not agencies. Workshop = step before agency, not replacement.

2. Hawk OS

“A version of the same AI system our agency runs on” — built by three people working full-time on AI implementation, building off what 120 SEO specialists do daily.

3. ICP

“Not getting consistent leads from Google or AI Search” (not “zero organic traffic”).

4. Catchphrase

“Stop guessing. Start showing up.”

5. Credibility

45 industry awards. Seven times Best Large SEO Agency, judged by fifty independent reviewers. No Forbes in credibility stacking (Forbes stays in origin story scripts only).

6. AI Team

“Three people working full-time on AI implementation” (not “three AI engineers”).

7. No “Full Service”

No “full service agency” or “we do that too” references anywhere in the campaign.

8. Harry’s Voice

Direct, short punchy sentences, first-person, anti-guru energy. “Explaining to a mate.”